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Rivets's avatar

I hate multiple POVs. Give me a nice linear flow, no jumping around. A small amount of thoughts/opinions for individuals is fine but not whole threads.

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Darrow Woods's avatar

Another interesting essay! In my current work in progress I use a character's journal as a second POV. Your piece reminds/challenges me to create more dissonance between the two POV's. That should not be difficult, since the journal is written by the daughter of the protagonist.

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